I want to walk on the clouds
People in love do not walk on earth
They walk on clouds
They do not stumble upon the stones in the path
They kick the stars and the moon
Milestones on the road are not for them
They are the travelers of one realm to the other
I want to walk on the clouds
The wounded and weary ones on this road
Tries to scare me
How do I tell them
This is not an individual's journey
But of a soul's..
Manisha Sharma~
wow... deep!! Sharing..
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Archana! ^_^
DeleteBeautifully Penned! Indeed it's a soul's journey.
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Thank you Chaicy :)
Deletenicely written
ReplyDeleteThank you Cifar :)
DeleteOh yes, definitely..it's a journey of the soul!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem!
Thank you Amit :)
DeleteBeautifully expressed Manisha ... loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Kokila ^_^
DeleteNice one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Aneeta :)
DeleteBeautiful ...!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Prabhjeet :)
Deleteबहुत बढ़िया, मनीषा जी!
ReplyDeleteबहुत-बहुत शुक्रिया ज्योति जी :)
Deleteबहुत बढ़िया, मनीषा जी!
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ReplyDeleteNice one Manisha, I like the optimism in the dream and the desire to 'walk over the clouds' to say metaphorically :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vinay :)
DeleteUr poem is very close to reality of person in love .. I really appreciate ur writings .. It is awesome ... Keep it up
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandeep, its good to see you here :)
DeleteHeart's journey?
ReplyDeleteA soul travels and touches the heart of another.. A souls journey :)
DeleteAmazing blog.....
ReplyDeleteAs they say it's better to have loved and lost, than not loved at all. People who try to take away the thrill of walking on the clouds need to remember that:)
ReplyDeleteI agree Lata :)
DeleteThat is so lovely. Totally out of this world.. :D
ReplyDeleteThank u so much Seena
Deleteso deep :)
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